Code Context <?php foreach ($random_data as $novel): ?>
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'headerTitle' => 'ノベル道場/小説の批評をし合おう！',
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'title' => '寿国演義 無邪気皇后銀鈴、茶番で投獄されるのこと',
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'url' => 'https://ranove.sakura.ne.jp/1story_system/public_story/03084.shtml',
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'comment' => ' ドラコンです。「創作相談掲示板」「プロット掲示板」でアドバイスをくださった皆さん、ありがとうございます。何とか完成させました。掲示板のほうへ、構想を出していたころが、いちばん楽しかったですね。実際の執筆では、ハイになる特に書きたい場面はともかく、その他の場面は「事務作業」でした。出そうか、出すまいか、迷ったのですが、せっかく完成させられたので、出してみます。
とはいっても、何度も「創作相談掲示板」「プロット掲示板」「プロローブ掲示板」「旧掲示板」「鍛錬投稿室」に投稿したものの焼き直しですが。それこそ、初出から最大10年前後経っています。覚えておいでの方はいますか？
書いていて感じたことは、以下の通りです（順不同）。
1、「中華・時代劇風ファンタジー世界」が上手く表現できているか？ 洋服を着ている印象を持たれたくないので、今作ではあえて服装説明を細かくしてみた。その印象は？
2、香々の故郷が、「シルクロードの町」と感じられるか？
3、地の文のうち、「発言者を示す」「視点人物の心情」「背景事情」「キャラの仕草や表情」の書き方がよく分からない。発言者を示す部分は、「〇〇がこう言った」の単調になりやすい。
4、全体的にご都合主義ではないか？
5、香々が、消えたり現れたり、閉じ込められていても、出たり入ったりするが便利過ぎないか（ご都合主義）？
6、裁判場面が2回あるなど、同じ内容を繰り返し書いた感じがするが、その印象は？
7、作中劇『梨妙音伝』は、初出時には簡単に地の文で説明し、後に銀鈴が細かく説明している。このやり方はどう思われるか？
8、こちらの管理人・うっぴーさんがツイートされている創作論（ https://twitter.com/ranokenn ）とは、正反対のことばかりやっているのでは？ 主人公・銀鈴が、「受け身」「操り人形」では？ また、設定ばかり書き連ねているのでは？
9、特に書きたい場面はハイになった。だが、それ以外の場面や推敲は、「単なる事務作業」の感じがした。
10、タイトルの印象は？ 作品全体のタイトルも、章題も、「出オチ（ネタバレ）」になっているのか？ それともこれで良かったのか？
11、台詞を書いていて、銀鈴、茘娘、棗児、香々が「何でこんなことを知っているのか？」と感じた。
12、Wordの音声読み上げ機能を使って推敲すると、場面によっては、「録音した自分の声を聞く感じ」の恥ずかしさがある。また、量が多いので読み上げにも時間が掛かる。
13、どうしても、台詞が「説明臭く」感じる。
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