「底辺ニートは豪奢な夢を見る」の返信一覧

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投稿日時： 2020年02月01日

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この小説を読んで本当に笑えるのか教えて欲しいです。
それと19話まで書きましたが先の展開が思いつきません。
皆さまの意見や批評を聞きたいです。
忌憚のない感想お願いします。',
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$excellent = (int) 3
$headerTitle = 'ノベル道場/小説の批評をし合おう！'
$title = '「底辺ニートは豪奢な夢を見る」の返信一覧。ノベル道場/小説の批評をし合おう！'
$title2 = 'ノベル道場/小説の批評をし合おう！'
$description = '「底辺ニートは豪奢な夢を見る」の返信一覧。ネット上に投稿した小説の批評をし合うための掲示板です。小説投稿サイトに投稿したけれど感想がまったくもらえない、どこを手直ししたらもっとおもしろくなるのかわからない、自作の長所、欠点を知りたい、という方、ぜひお使いください。他人の批評依頼に書き込みをすると、あなたの最新の批評依頼がサイトの一番先頭に移動し、「おすすめ小説」の表示が付いて批評をもらいやすくなります。'
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$meta = (int) 1
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$form = (int) 1
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$h2 = '他の批評依頼'
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include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 11
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1196
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1157
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1554
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 668
include - APP/Template/Novels/tree.ctp, line 31
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1196
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1157
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 765
Cake\Controller\Controller::render() - CORE/src/Controller/Controller.php, line 623
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::_invoke() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 125
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::dispatch() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 93
Cake\Http\BaseApplication::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/BaseApplication.php, line 108
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\RoutingMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/RoutingMiddleware.php, line 104
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\AssetMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/AssetMiddleware.php, line 88

このエクストラ地獄ハードモードの異世界に慈悲はない

投稿者血まるこ返信数 : 1

投稿日時： 2019年04月19日

異世界転生ものです。超絶面白ギャグのつもりで書きましたが面白いのかどうかわかりません。この小説を読んで本当に笑えるのか教えて欲し... 続きを読む >>

長所を教えてください！

小説投稿先URL（別タブが開きます）
https://ncode.syosetu.com/n2269fb/

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投稿者日凪けい返信数 : 10

投稿日時： 2023年02月11日

流行りのものからはかけ離れているので、つまらなかったり主人公に共感できなかったりしないか不安です。また文章表現としておかしなところが... 続きを読む >>

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