「迷宮都市・幻想特区」の返信一覧

迷宮都市・幻想特区 (No:1)

スレ主冬空星屑

投稿日時： 2019年03月20日

迷宮都市・幻想特区の返信 (No: 2)

投稿者ソラナキ : 1 No: 1の返信

良いと思います。主人公はエリクサーでも飲んだのかな？で、ヒロインは青い髪の女の子？ ... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2019年03月22日

呪われの神子　――親を殺すために神を目指す―― (No: 3)

スレ主冬空星屑 : 1 No: 2の返信

　ありがとうございます❗️ 　タイトルを考え直した方が良いかもしれませんね。　状況説明... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2019年03月22日

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小説の最重要箇所であるタイトルとプロローグを改善するための相談、意見交換ができる掲示板です。
タイトルが良くないとそもそも読者は小説を読んでくれません。
また、プロローグがおもしろくなくては、ブックマークに登録してくれません。タイトルとプロローグで小説の評価は９割決まります。
この２つを改善するための相談ができる場所です。

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小説家になろう向けのタイトルのアドバイスをよろしくお願いします。
内容は真面目系な百合小説です。',
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$headerTitle = '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
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Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1164
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1561
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Cake\Routing\Middleware\RoutingMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/RoutingMiddleware.php, line 104
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\AssetMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/AssetMiddleware.php, line 88

JKと女教師の恋

投稿者田中一郎返信数 : 2

投稿日時： 2019年09月06日

小説のタイトルでなろう小説に向いているタイトルが思いつきません。小説家になろう向けのタイトルのアドバイスをよろしくお願いします。... 続きを読む >>

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