「ステーキ！　ステーキ！　ステーキ！」の返信一覧

小説の最重要箇所であるタイトルとプロローグを改善するための相談、意見交換ができる掲示板です。
タイトルが良くないとそもそも読者は小説を読んでくれません。
また、プロローグがおもしろくなくては、ブックマークに登録してくれません。タイトルとプロローグで小説の評価は９割決まります。
この２つを改善するための相談ができる場所です。

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        <?php $i2++; ?>
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		'title' => 'ツンデレラを脱がしたい',
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		'created' => '2021-03-08 18:57:16',
		'comment' => '次回、なんだっけ？
軍略に至る病？ 軍略に至る絶望？？？
…狼に至る絶望とか、そんな感じになります。

主にコボルトと人間のハーフ…
イメージ的には無職の剣王ですわ。
コボルト社会を改革したコボルトの女ボスの話しメイン。
裏切り者の新米憲兵、殺すか迷い中
「裏切り者は二人も要らない…」とか言って

満月に魔女が狼になります。

コバルト色の絶望だったかな？
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$excellent = (int) 3
$headerTitle = '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$title = '「ステーキ！　ステーキ！　ステーキ！」の返信一覧。小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$title2 = '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$description = '「ステーキ！　ステーキ！　ステーキ！」の返信一覧。小説の最重要箇所であるタイトルとプロローグを改善するための相談、意見交換ができる掲示板です。タイトルが良くないとそもそも読者は小説を読んでくれません。また、プロローグがおもしろくなくては、ブックマークに登録してくれません。タイトルとプロローグで小説の評価は９割決まります。この２つを改善するための相談ができる場所です。'
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$meta = (int) 1
$advertisements = true
$form = (int) 1
$nondisplay = []
$h2 = '他の相談依頼'
$i2 = null
include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 11
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1203
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1164
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1561
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 675
include - APP/Template/Novels/tree.ctp, line 30
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1203
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1164
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 772
Cake\Controller\Controller::render() - CORE/src/Controller/Controller.php, line 623
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::_invoke() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 125
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::dispatch() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 93
Cake\Http\BaseApplication::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/BaseApplication.php, line 108
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\RoutingMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/RoutingMiddleware.php, line 104
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\AssetMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/AssetMiddleware.php, line 88

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投稿者つたぬき返信数 : 1

投稿日時： 2021年03月08日

次回、なんだっけ？軍略に至る病？軍略に至る絶望？？？ …狼に至る絶望とか、そんな感じになります。主にコボルトと人間の... 続きを読む >>

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投稿者 YM 返信数 : 2

投稿日時： 2020年05月14日

ページを開いていただきありがとうございます。物語の導入部まで書いてみたのですが自分自身あまり納得ができていないため、よろしければ皆様... 続きを読む >>

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投稿日時： 2023年01月22日

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