「凍った瞳改稿版1」の返信一覧

凍った瞳改稿版1 (No:1)

スレ主 silica

投稿日時： 2021年11月24日

凍った瞳改稿版1の返信 (No: 2)

投稿者日暮れ : 0 No: 1の返信

私あんまり掲示板には顔を出さないんですけど、なんとなくふらっと寄ってみました。ちなみに、... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年11月25日

凍った瞳改稿版1の返信 (No: 3)

投稿者カイト : 0 No: 1の返信

silicaさんこんにちは。カイトです。今回も読ませていただきました。登場人物や状況... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年11月25日

凍った瞳改稿版1の返信 (No: 4)

スレ主 silica : 0 No: 1の返信

日暮れさん、カイトさん、返信ありがとうございます。たしかに、夜が明けた時点でシーンは終わ... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年11月29日

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投稿者柊木なお : 1 No: 1の返信

silica様執筆お疲れ様です。プロローグを読ませていただきました。短い... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年12月06日

凍った瞳改稿版1の返信 (No: 6)

スレ主 silica : 0 No: 1の返信

柊木なお様、返信ありがとうございます。〉短い中に世界観とキャラクターの紹介がうまく収... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年12月07日

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投稿者ラ研の無惨 : 0 No: 1の返信

どうもこんにちは。先日はプロット及び相談掲示板にレスをいただきありがとうございます。プロ... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年12月09日

凍った瞳改稿版1の返信 (No: 8)

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こんにちは。ラ研の無惨様、返信ありがとうございます。たしかに、改めて読み直してみると... 続きを読む >>

投稿日時： 2021年12月10日

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小説の最重要箇所であるタイトルとプロローグを改善するための相談、意見交換ができる掲示板です。
タイトルが良くないとそもそも読者は小説を読んでくれません。
また、プロローグがおもしろくなくては、ブックマークに登録してくれません。タイトルとプロローグで小説の評価は９割決まります。
この２つを改善するための相談ができる場所です。

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Notice (8): Undefined variable: i2 [APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 11]Code Context        <?php foreach ($random_data as $novel): ?>
        <?php $i2++; ?>
        <div class="list-group-item">
$viewFile = '/home/users/2/weblike.jp-tennsaku/web/prologue/src/Template/Element/random_data.ctp'
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		'[errors]' => [[maximum depth reached]],
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	'headerTitle' => '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』',
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	'meta' => (int) 1,
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		'id' => '70',
		'title' => 'このツールの詳細、知ってる人いますか？',
		'score' => '0',
		'url' => '',
		'created' => '2018-06-21 20:53:24',
		'comment' => 'ツイッターを見てたらこんなツイートが！

【お知らせ】小説家専用の執筆ツール「Nola」がついに完成しました！
原稿の執筆やプロットの作成、登場人物の登録・保存まで、小説を書く時に役立つ機能をまとめました。
たくさんの作家さんに使ってもらえたら嬉しいです。
よろしくお願いします！

実際に使ってみたら、こんなに簡単に登場人物や参考資料をまとめられるの！？
このNolaのお勧めの機能とか知ってる人いたら、教えてください！
このNola気になった方は、リンク張っときますのでどうぞ。
https://nola-novel.com/login',
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$excellent = (int) 3
$headerTitle = '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$title = '「凍った瞳 改稿版1」の返信一覧。小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$title2 = '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$description = '「凍った瞳 改稿版1」の返信一覧。小説の最重要箇所であるタイトルとプロローグを改善するための相談、意見交換ができる掲示板です。タイトルが良くないとそもそも読者は小説を読んでくれません。また、プロローグがおもしろくなくては、ブックマークに登録してくれません。タイトルとプロローグで小説の評価は９割決まります。この２つを改善するための相談ができる場所です。'
$site_name = '小説のタイトル・プロローグ改善相談所『ノベル道場』'
$meta = (int) 1
$advertisements = true
$form = (int) 1
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include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 11
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1203
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1164
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1561
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 675
include - APP/Template/Novels/tree.ctp, line 30
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1203
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1164
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 772
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