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Notice (8): Undefined variable: i2 [APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 13]季重なりの句が多く見かけられますね！Code Context<p class="comment2"><?php $i2++; ?><?=$viewFile = '/home/users/2/weblike.jp-tennsaku/web/haizinn/src/Template/Element/random_data.ctp' $dataForView = [ '_serialize' => [ (int) 0 => 'haikus' ], 'haiku' => object(Cake\ORM\Entity) { '[new]' => true, '[accessible]' => [ [maximum depth reached] ], '[dirty]' => [[maximum depth reached]], '[original]' => [[maximum depth reached]], '[virtual]' => [[maximum depth reached]], '[errors]' => [[maximum depth reached]], '[invalid]' => [[maximum depth reached]], '[repository]' => 'Haikus' }, 'tree' => object(Cake\ORM\Query) { '(help)' => 'This is a Query object, to get the results execute or iterate it.', 'sql' => 'SELECT haikus.id AS "haikus__id", haikus.haiku AS "haikus__haiku", haikus.title AS "haikus__title", haikus.comment AS "haikus__comment", haikus.parent_no AS "haikus__parent_no", haikus.score AS "haikus__score", haikus.created AS 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大変良い句なのですが季重りの句が目立って多いのが残念です。季重なりは絶対駄目とは言えないのですが、大変失礼な言い方なのですが素人は出... 続きを読む >>
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