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投稿日時： 2019年12月12日

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		'title' => '季語を詠む《一》',
		'haiku' => '生きもせずくたばりもせで冬ざるる',
		'comment' => '◆ 冬ざれ ◆


万物枯れて荒涼とした様子




例句



冬ざるる夜の木更津甚句かな

清水基吉


冬ざれや乾きて白き河原石

村田近子


冬ざるる残留孤児のイヤリング

高木篤子 


冬ざれの文士の墓は石ひとつ

松宮幹彦




俳句自習帖

・見ると観るの違い



見るというのは肉体の目で見ること
観るは観察の観で表面のみではなく
心の認識まで至る、いわば心眼で対象に迫ることを指す


俳句は対象の本質を認識し直観し
５７５の詩で表現するものですから
見るのではなく観ることが大事です





よろしければ冬ざれで一句どうぞ
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	'title' => '「季語を詠む《一》」の返信一覧。俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板',
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		'created' => '2023-08-03 08:05:01',
		'comment' => '今年の連日の猛暑に　
流石の向日葵も
驚愕してるのでは…*
　　(;ﾟдﾟ)/
初心者なので添削をお願いします。',
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	'id' => (int) 613,
	'title' => '季語を詠む《一》',
	'haiku' => '生きもせずくたばりもせで冬ざるる',
	'comment' => '◆ 冬ざれ ◆


万物枯れて荒涼とした様子




例句



冬ざるる夜の木更津甚句かな

清水基吉


冬ざれや乾きて白き河原石

村田近子


冬ざるる残留孤児のイヤリング

高木篤子 


冬ざれの文士の墓は石ひとつ

松宮幹彦




俳句自習帖

・見ると観るの違い



見るというのは肉体の目で見ること
観るは観察の観で表面のみではなく
心の認識まで至る、いわば心眼で対象に迫ることを指す


俳句は対象の本質を認識し直観し
５７５の詩で表現するものですから
見るのではなく観ることが大事です





よろしければ冬ざれで一句どうぞ
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$excellent = (int) 3
$id = (int) 0
$headerTitle = '俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板'
$title = '「季語を詠む《一》」の返信一覧。俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板'
$title2 = '俳句クラブ『今日の一句』'
$description = '「季語を詠む《一》」の返信一覧。俳句を趣味にしている人同士のコミュニティです。最近の出来事などの雑談と一緒に「今日の一句」を投稿して、俳人仲間と交流しましょう！お題を出しての投句、俳句についての質問、創作の相談、俳句大会の情報交換などもできます。'
$site_name = '俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板'
$meta = (int) 1
$advertisements = true
$nondisplay = []
$h2 = '他の相談一覧'
$i2 = null
include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 13
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1598
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 706
include - APP/Template/Haikus/tree.ctp, line 31
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 803
Cake\Controller\Controller::render() - CORE/src/Controller/Controller.php, line 777
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::_invoke() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 126
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::dispatch() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 94
Cake\Http\BaseApplication::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/BaseApplication.php, line 235
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
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投稿日時： 2023年08月03日

今年の連日の猛暑に　流石の向日葵も驚愕してるのでは…* 　　(;ﾟдﾟ)/ 初心者なので添削をお願いします。続きを読む >>

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投稿日時： 2019年07月17日

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投稿日時： 2019年07月14日

パクリマン様ちょっと悲しい俳号ですね…😞 ご丁寧なメッセージをくださって、ありがとうございました。お返事を書こうにも書... 続きを読む >>