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投稿日時： 2019年12月12日

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投稿日時： 2019年12月15日

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		'title' => '季語を詠む《一》',
		'haiku' => '生きもせずくたばりもせで冬ざるる',
		'comment' => '◆ 冬ざれ ◆


万物枯れて荒涼とした様子




例句



冬ざるる夜の木更津甚句かな

清水基吉


冬ざれや乾きて白き河原石

村田近子


冬ざるる残留孤児のイヤリング

高木篤子 


冬ざれの文士の墓は石ひとつ

松宮幹彦




俳句自習帖

・見ると観るの違い



見るというのは肉体の目で見ること
観るは観察の観で表面のみではなく
心の認識まで至る、いわば心眼で対象に迫ることを指す


俳句は対象の本質を認識し直観し
５７５の詩で表現するものですから
見るのではなく観ることが大事です





よろしければ冬ざれで一句どうぞ
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	'title' => '「季語を詠む《一》」の返信一覧。俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板',
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		'comment' => '皆さん応募はお済みですか？
締切は2月28日までです。ただで応募できてお金や自分の句が載ったお茶が貰えるチャンスです。今まで詠み溜めた句から未発表の作品を六句出してみましょう。',
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$HaikusOrigin = object(Cake\ORM\Entity) {

	'id' => (int) 613,
	'title' => '季語を詠む《一》',
	'haiku' => '生きもせずくたばりもせで冬ざるる',
	'comment' => '◆ 冬ざれ ◆


万物枯れて荒涼とした様子




例句



冬ざるる夜の木更津甚句かな

清水基吉


冬ざれや乾きて白き河原石

村田近子


冬ざるる残留孤児のイヤリング

高木篤子 


冬ざれの文士の墓は石ひとつ

松宮幹彦




俳句自習帖

・見ると観るの違い



見るというのは肉体の目で見ること
観るは観察の観で表面のみではなく
心の認識まで至る、いわば心眼で対象に迫ることを指す


俳句は対象の本質を認識し直観し
５７５の詩で表現するものですから
見るのではなく観ることが大事です





よろしければ冬ざれで一句どうぞ
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$excellent = (int) 3
$id = (int) 0
$headerTitle = '俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板'
$title = '「季語を詠む《一》」の返信一覧。俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板'
$title2 = '俳句クラブ『今日の一句』'
$description = '「季語を詠む《一》」の返信一覧。俳句を趣味にしている人同士のコミュニティです。最近の出来事などの雑談と一緒に「今日の一句」を投稿して、俳人仲間と交流しましょう！お題を出しての投句、俳句についての質問、創作の相談、俳句大会の情報交換などもできます。'
$site_name = '俳句クラブ『今日の一句』。俳人友達の交流掲示板'
$meta = (int) 1
$advertisements = true
$nondisplay = []
$h2 = '他の相談一覧'
$i2 = null
include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 13
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1598
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 706
include - APP/Template/Haikus/tree.ctp, line 31
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 803
Cake\Controller\Controller::render() - CORE/src/Controller/Controller.php, line 777
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::_invoke() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 126
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::dispatch() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 94
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