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投稿日時： 2020年12月09日

今話題のネット句会システム「俳句の壺」を利用して「やってみよう」句会を始めました。初心者... 続きを読む >>

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投稿日時： 2021年02月07日

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投稿日時： 2021年02月08日

ささゆみさん、こんにちわ。それでは 1969nacs@gmail.com ... 続きを読む >>

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俳句甲子園の元指導者や各種コンテスト大会の常連入賞者が句会や掲示板を通して実戦的なアドバイスをします。参加費用等は一切無料です。

https://haiku.upat.jp/catalog.cgi

https://haiku.upat.jp/?letstry

参加御希望の方にはパスワードを発行しますので

1969nacs @gmail.com  

大江深夜まで。問い合わせも大歓迎です。
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		'created' => '2019-06-16 14:45:35',
		'comment' => '◆紫陽花〈夏〉 
あじさい 
あぢさゐ 

かたしろぐさ 
四片 
七変化 
刺繍花 
濃紫陽花 
白紫陽花など多くの呼び名と種類がある。 
６～７月の梅雨時に咲く花で 
日に雨に色を変えることから七変化とも呼ばれる 


◆芭蕉のことば


俳諧といへども風雅の一筋なれば
姿かたちいやしく作りなすべからず。
《俳諧は詩の一つであるから品よく作るべきである》 


◆例句
紫陽花に秋冷いたる信濃かな 

杉田久女 


紫陽花や白よりいでし浅みどり 

渡辺水巴 


紫陽花やよれば蚊の鳴く花のうら 

暁台 

炙らるるちりめん皺や濃紫陽花 

はぐれ雲





◆レシピ ２ 


〈季語の選択が一句の命〉 



さみだれを集めてはやし最上川 

芭蕉 


五月雨や大河を前に家二軒 

蕪村 


五月雨や雪はいづこのしなの山 

一茶 




俳句は季語一つで生き死にが決まります。 
しつこく置き換えてみてください。 



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初心者の方や「なかなか俳句が上手くならない」とお悩みの方を歓迎しています。
俳句甲子園の元指導者や各種コンテスト大会の常連入賞者が句会や掲示板を通して実戦的なアドバイスをします。参加費用等は一切無料です。

https://haiku.upat.jp/catalog.cgi

https://haiku.upat.jp/?letstry

参加御希望の方にはパスワードを発行しますので

1969nacs @gmail.com  

大江深夜まで。問い合わせも大歓迎です。
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include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 13
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1598
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 706
include - APP/Template/Haikus/tree.ctp, line 31
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 803
Cake\Controller\Controller::render() - CORE/src/Controller/Controller.php, line 777
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::_invoke() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 126
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::dispatch() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 94
Cake\Http\BaseApplication::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/BaseApplication.php, line 235
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\RoutingMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/RoutingMiddleware.php, line 156
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\AssetMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/AssetMiddleware.php, line 88

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管理人様にお伺いしたいのですが。

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投稿日時： 2019年03月03日

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不安な日々が続いてますね。

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