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'haiku' => '入選の欄に名のなき溽暑かな',
'title' => '添削について',
'score' => '2',
'created' => '2020-02-09 05:34:33',
'comment' => 'この添削道場にも、優れた添削例がたくさんあります。
ここでは私（悠）の目に付いた佳き添削と悪しき添削を紹介したいと思います。
少しでも、皆様の句力向上のお役に立てればと願っております。
先ず、添削の大原則は【自分の好きな句、愛せる句】、または秀句の芽を孕む句を、添削対象として選ぶことです。
佳き添削
・実例 ①
◎俳壇の末席を得る褥暑かな
作者 腹井壮
投稿日 2018年07月15日
コメント（俳句の意味。悩みどころ）
どうも皆様こんにちわ。いつもお世話になります。東京俳壇(小澤実選)五ヶ月連続入選ながら特選が無い腹胃壮です。なんとなく自虐的に詠んでしまいました。 俳壇と言っても俳句界全体を指す場合もあれば新聞の俳句投稿欄を指す場合もあるので区別がしずら… 続き読む
最新の添削
「俳壇の末席を得る褥暑かな」の批評
回答者 ハオニー 2018年07月16日
たぶん、溽暑の間違いだと思います
溽暑に感情を託したのだとしたら、それはそれでいいと思います
もしかしたら、腹胃様は漢字を間違えたために選から漏れた句が割とあるのではとハオニーは感じています
自虐に走る前に、一字一句推敲なさることをおすすめします（ハオニー）
この添削は言葉の間違い、文字の間違いを指摘して作句姿勢をも諌めている佳き添削例です。
俳句は十七文字しかないので、一字一句を大切にしましょう。
目に付いた佳き添削をご紹介ください。
よろしくお願いいたしますm(._.)m',
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