「添削道場の世代交代」の返信一覧

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添削道場に組織における世代交代論を持ち込む必要があるのか甚だ疑問の腹胃壮です。
ところで長谷川櫂氏のブログに「年をとったから俳句を止める」という男性の記事がありました。そこで長谷川櫂氏は体育会系精神論を展開しておりましたがそれについては割愛します。
私はスポーツ選手でもあるまいし若くなければ俳句が詠めないというのなら今までどんな句詠んできたのか気になりました。おそらく下手でも上手いわけでもなく特に特徴のない句を読まれていたのではと勝手に想像していす。
こういう人は無理に俳句を続けさせても先はあまり無さそうなので俳句を自ら止めるというのは正解だと思いました。大事な余生は別の事に使って欲しいと思います。

さて、俳句に人間性が重要と説くのは長谷川櫂氏の事です。
松尾芭蕉が俳聖と呼ばれるのはその生き方、優秀な弟子が集まる人徳、優秀な弟子を育てる手腕があるからで決して作品だけの評価ではないと思います。ですから長谷川櫂氏の仰る事も理解できます。

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添削道場に組織における世代交代論を持ち込む必要があるのか甚だ疑問の腹胃壮です。
ところで長谷川櫂氏のブログに「年をとったから俳句を止める」という男性の記事がありました。そこで長谷川櫂氏は体育会系精神論を展開しておりましたがそれについては割愛します。
私はスポーツ選手でもあるまいし若くなければ俳句が詠めないというのなら今までどんな句詠んできたのか気になりました。おそらく下手でも上手いわけでもなく特に特徴のない句を読まれていたのではと勝手に想像していす。
こういう人は無理に俳句を続けさせても先はあまり無さそうなので俳句を自ら止めるというのは正解だと思いました。大事な余生は別の事に使って欲しいと思います。

さて、俳句に人間性が重要と説くのは長谷川櫂氏の事です。
松尾芭蕉が俳聖と呼ばれるのはその生き方、優秀な弟子が集まる人徳、優秀な弟子を育てる手腕があるからで決して作品だけの評価ではないと思います。ですから長谷川櫂氏の仰る事も理解できます。

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ここまで言ってもわからん人にはわからないでしょうからこの辺で。',
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include - APP/Template/Element/random_data.ctp, line 13
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::_renderElement() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1598
Cake\View\View::element() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 706
include - APP/Template/Haikus/tree.ctp, line 31
Cake\View\View::_evaluate() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1240
Cake\View\View::_render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 1201
Cake\View\View::render() - CORE/src/View/View.php, line 803
Cake\Controller\Controller::render() - CORE/src/Controller/Controller.php, line 777
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::_invoke() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 126
Cake\Http\ActionDispatcher::dispatch() - CORE/src/Http/ActionDispatcher.php, line 94
Cake\Http\BaseApplication::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/BaseApplication.php, line 235
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\RoutingMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/RoutingMiddleware.php, line 156
Cake\Http\Runner::__invoke() - CORE/src/Http/Runner.php, line 65
Cake\Routing\Middleware\AssetMiddleware::__invoke() - CORE/src/Routing/Middleware/AssetMiddleware.php, line 88

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管理人様にお伺いしたいのですが。

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雑談です

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